Lost in Dinosaur World Page 3 - 1st Character Pan

After months of trying to raster my original pencil sketch, while attending to other priorities, then finally having to re-draw that scene from scratch, I finally drew and colored Timothy McDunn and his parents for the first panel of Page #3 for Lost in Dinosaur World!

No Thanks To You, Jerks! (I kid of course, there's no bad blood between us at all)

So now all I gotta do is crop those characters, add a background then move on to the second panel and the rest of the story from then on.

But as usual I am open to further criticism; and (while I was joking) I would very much like to hear your thoughts on what I can do to make these characters look even better so as always-- PLEASE share your thoughts.

Thank You.